1. Lana should press play before the music starts so
we know where the music is coming from
2. Music should end straighht way when Lana’s phone rings
3. Close up shot of Lana putting on lipstick so we have a range of camera shots
4. Point of view shot of the bullies legs while they run
around Naila in a circle to show how irritating it is for her to be bullied in this constant circle
5. Flashback colour change, so it would represent an unhappy time, the colour red which will be used links back to the horror genre
These improvements will be added on to ensure our target audience are satisfied with what they are watching.
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